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Bathwater of the Gods - Pirates!

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Didn't do anything for me, David. Personally, I always like these 3 frame comic things to have a completely insane ending that makes very little sense. Like perhaps you could inexplicably turn into a bike to your shipmate's horror.

Or have Abu Hamza as the shipmate.

Now that's a shame, I was sure that was funny. Sure enough to sink a few hours into photo sourcing and shopping anyway. Oh well, on to the next one...

It's not bad, but not as good as the first two.

It's a little to badoomtish but runners lose a little steam on the 3rd one. Also the other 2 were about perverted sex so your changing the formula

It wasn't meant to be a perverted sex runner, though I can certainly see why you would think it was since I presented two comics on that theme in a row. Oh well, if ever I make enough good ones of these to justify a collection I'll make sure I don't run those two back to back. Cheers for the feedback, all.

Quote: sootyj @ July 13 2010, 10:30 AM BST

It's a little to badoomtish but runners lose a little steam on the 3rd one. Also the other 2 were about perverted sex so your changing the formula

Everyone's allowed a vanity project now and then ;)

I think because the other 2 were more laugh out load this suffers, probably if it was the first one it'd get a better re-action.

Quote: dannyjb1 @ July 13 2010, 12:56 PM BST

Everyone's allowed a vanity project now and then ;)

I think because the other 2 were more laugh out load this suffers, probably if it was the first one it'd get a better re-action.

Your talking about the sculpture of yourself your making from corned beef aren't you?

It needs a better hook David.

Quote: dannyjb1 @ July 13 2010, 12:56 PM BST

Everyone's allowed a vanity project now and then ;)

I think because the other 2 were more laugh out load this suffers, probably if it was the first one it'd get a better re-action.

Fair point, Danny. Cheers for taking a look.

Quote: Marc P @ July 13 2010, 1:01 PM BST

It needs a better hook David.

And out he springs like a coiled pun panther! (punther?)

I said deck!

Can somebody grab my wheal!

The last time I saw one as big as that it was on a whale!

Why is your head always stiff Cap'n?

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