I posted these sketches in critique and then I ran off and filmed them and those very filmings can be seen here if you would like to check them out:
TOBY TWACK
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VcJ4-vVd-nM&feature=related
THE SHOOGALOO
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EXLtObejb8A
(apologies for the poor English accents in Shoogaloo 
I've nearly had 1 reply in only 2years. I Forgot I even posted this here. We film stuff a bit better now but any thoughts on the content would be great.
Liked them both. Some great moments, especially Toby rolling down the hill followed by the deadpan comment "He must have fallen" and the swan at the end of the second one which was hilarious 
Thanks Ishy. I know the sound quality isnt the best but I was hoping for a review on the content itself which you have given. I was hoping to get 'Toby' to fall down a steep hill but he wouldnt commit