Home School - Part 3

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Thanks

That's damned funny - well done.

See what the others think, but perhaps a sharper ending would be:

DAD

What have you done?! (LIFTS MUM'S ARM; CHECKS PULSE) You've killed her! You just weren't paying attention; cycling too fast, full of the joys of May, without a care in the world, now look!

FREDDIE

I didn't even touch her!

DAD hangs his head and extends his hand. FREDDIE pulls licence from pocket and gives it to him.

Even ignoring that though, this is a top sketch

Thanks, Rick. Nice edit, I'll turn my attention to tuning up the end.

Haha, I like this as it is.

Good stuff

It's really good this. The characters and situation have, dare I say it, sitcom potential. 'Home School' is a great situation, and very original.

This is great and such a strong set of characters.