INT. HOSPITAL.
A DOCTOR IS TALKING TO A DISTRESSED WOMAN.
DOCTOR:
We're doing what we can but it's proving to be more aggressive than we anticipated and has spread to the blood.
CUT TO ROOM: A MAN IS LYING IN HOSPITAL BED AND IN ANOTHER BED BESIDE HIM LIES A BANDANA-CLAD BLACK GANG MEMBER.
Can I be the first to say I don't get it.
I get it but it's a bit of a leap. Might work better if you can think of a few other visual puns...spread to the blood, hair/hare...and something else that I can't think of...
Fair enough, thought it might be too niche. 'Blood' as in black gang member.
Is it too Criptic?
Quote: Marc P @ March 30 2010, 3:53 PM BSTIs it too Criptic?
Just worked out why I wasn't getting this - I was reading it "BANANA-CLAD". You can see my confusion I'm sure.
I didn't read it as 'BANANA-CLAD', thus once again proving my comedy instincts are sharper than Bussell's. Thinking this might work best as a cartoon? Or maybe not.
Probably suited more to the world of cartoons. Thank you one and all.
Quote: Tim Walker @ March 30 2010, 4:00 PM BSTI didn't read it as 'BANANA-CLAD', thus once again proving my comedy instincts are sharper than Bussell's. Thinking this might work best as a cartoon? Or maybe not.
It's not that, I just had a beautiful woman distracting me with her junk.
This might work as a cartoon.
Quote: David Bussell @ March 30 2010, 4:08 PM BSTThis might work as a cartoon.
Now I know exactly how George Osborne feels when Alistair Darling steals his tax policies. Exactly. 
Quote: David Bussell @ March 30 2010, 4:08 PM BSTIt's not that, I just had a beautiful woman distracting me with her junk.
Just goes to prove that women and comedy don't mix. 
(Oh lordy, Mom's gonna be mad...)