Ecstacy for Radio?

May be this is a radio sketch. It may need something. What do you think?

WE HEAR TWO VOICES.

First Voice
How many Es do you have?

Second Voice
How many do you want?

First Voice
Two or three?

Second Voice
I’ll have a look.

RUSTLING SOUND AS HE RUMAGES IN A BAG.

You can have one.

First Voice
Cheers mate. Huh, I got you!

Second Voice
What is this?

First Voice
BUSTED. I’m arresting you for possession of an E. Anything you say may be used in evidence against you.

Seven letters and a triple word score. 75 points in your face.

Second Voice
It’s a fair cop

First Voice
Now get your coat you’re nicked son.

I have to admit this made me chuckle-although Im sure the theme is one frequently used. For radio though, I love the idea of rumaging in the bag-Scrabble tiles sound so distinctive

Great for radio. Very funny.

Cool. & funny.