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INT - DENTIST - DAY
DENTIST
Good morning Mr Murphy. What can I do for you this morning?
MR MURPHY
Yes. I have this tooth. I mean, it's very wobbly. I keep thinking it's going to fall out but no, it just hangs on in there.
DENTIST
Okay, is it gas or -
MR MURPHY (jokingly, proud)
No, no. I'm a Jehovah Witness. No pain, no game.
DENTIST
Anne, can you pass me some string please.
ANNE (DENTAL ASSISTANT)
How long?
MR MURPHY (jokingly)
How long is a piece of a string?
THE DENTIST & ANNE LOOK ON IN DISSAPPROVAL
DENTIST
Just enough to reach the door handle please.
MR MURPHY LOOKS A LITTLE AGITATED NOW.
THE DENTIST TIES THE STRING AROUND MR MURPHYS TOOTH.
DENTIST
(handing the other end of the string to Anne)
If you can tie that around the door handle please.
MR MURPHY
You're not actually going to -
DENTIST
And close....
ANNE SLAMS THE DOOR SHUT. MR MURPHY JUMPS OUT OF THE CHAIR.
MR MURPHY
Arghhhhhhhhhhh!!! Fffff....Ahh!
MR MURPHY IS SQUIRMING IN PAIN
THE DENTIST AND ANNE REMAIN UNMOVED BY IT ALL AND AWAIT FOR MR MURPHY TO RETURN TO A CALM STATE
DENTIST
Okay. Mr. Murphy, if you'd just like to open wide for me and say Ahhh.
MR MURPHY
(opening his mouth)
Ahhhhhh....
DENTIST
Now. Let's get that tooth out.
