Self Help Sketch

Int. Community Hall

Five men are sat on chairs in a circle. Man 1 stands up

Man 1:
Well, my names Steven and I'm addicted to-

Man 2 stands up quickly.

Man 2:
Finishing off-

Man 3 stands up quickly.

Man 3:
Other peoples-

There is a pause and everyone looks at Man 4. He slowly stands up.

Man 4:
Sorry, I think I've got the wrong room. I was looking for Alcoholics Anonymous.

Man 3:
It's the third room-

Man 2:
Down on the-

Man 1:
Left you-

Man 5 quicky stands up.

Man 5:
PISSHEAD! (BEAT) Sorry! I meant "Where's Tourettes?".

ENDS

Ha! That's actually quite funny, the punch line is good. Enjoyed it mate.

Really love that.

Had me LOLing!

Very good and very clever punch!

Lovely stuff Bennifer!

Nice one.

Maybe you can milk it a bit more. Man4 can sense they're about to finish his sentence and so says it really quickly - or they try and second guess what he's saying?

Funny stuff. 10/10.

Really, really good. I wouldn't change a thing.

Agree with Kasm. Most good.

Thanks all!

It's nice & quick & simple.
But I take it that the people expect the next person to continue their sentence each time rather than actually being interrupted.
So it seemed more like a group of people addicted to letting people finish off their - sorry I think I've got the wrong room.

Shouldn't the men have been PREDICTABLY sitting in a circle?

Nice sketch Ben