Mickeza
Saturday 20th February 2010 9:37pm [Edited]
Neath/Cardiff
245 posts
Quote: Yacob Wingnut @ February 17 2010, 5:09 PM GMT
Bit juvenile I thought. Think a lot of the script could be trimmed (the coffee bit for instance doesn't serve a purpose and imo isn't funny).
Couldn't disagree more, the coffee bit was my favourite part, loved him flailing his arm in the air.
I thought the whole thing was pretty fantastic, perhaps a few more gags could be added in the 'banter' parts between Frank and Steve, but loved the idea of the Zombie, and the Kanye West bit was good too. The title is also good, so all in all, excellent. A job well done