I'm a bit of a tosser, but...

can some of you take pity on me and read a radio play of mine.

Some of you lovely people read a sitcom of mine in the past and were extremely helpful. Admittedly so helpful that I sealed it in a septic tank and threw it down a mineshaft - but don't let that discourage you. I do that with <i>everything</i>.

Essentially, the last thing that went off to the Writers' Room got rejected, but it had made it past a few stages. Now I have a radio play which I like.

In listening to other BBC radio 'comedies' I know that mine differs loads - but I'd really appreciate anyone taking the time and being as critical as you feel like being?

I'll certainly return the favour if you're interested.

Rick www.inkyquillproductions.co.uk
(Spanking new website)

PM me if you like.
I don't know how soon I'll get to it, but it sounds like ideal Work Displacement Activity.

I'll read it - I don't care what it's about.

Ah, good point.

A sort of anachronism-heavy medieval love/revenge story.

Ta very much - I'm in work at the moment but will PM tonight.

Hi Rick,

I always enjoyed your stuff in Critique, good to see you back!

I'd like to have a look at your play. I doubt I'd be able to offer any advice, but if you want a laypersons opinion....PM me too please.

Ta very much for your comments Angie - really, really useful.

Nice one.

I think I said I'd read your last script, didn't I? I should've told you the email account that you sent the link to suddenly closed down, before I read it.

You did indeed - although I thought you got back to me about it with your comments.

Closed down? What did you DO?