Hello. I can't decide whether to do the end as blunt statement, as it is here, or more of an implication kind of thing, if you know what I mean. Any thoughts on that and in general would be most nice. and all that. Cheers
INT. A KITCHEN. SFX: A PARTY. TWO BISCUITS, A DIGESTIVE AND A COOKIE ARE STANDING IN FRONT OF A LINE OF CUPS OF TEA ON A KITCHEN WORK TOP.
DIGESTIVE
Not again.
COOKIE
You're so boring Digestive. Don't be such a wholemeal.
DIGESTIVE
Alright, but if I start smearing my soggy crumbs over the Jaffa Cakes stop me this time won't you?
THEY DUNK THEIR HEADS INTO THE CUPS AS IF DOING SHOTS. COOKIE SLUMPS ON THE WORKTOP.
DIGESTIVE (CONT'D)
( COUGHING ) How much sugar's in those?
COOKIE
I feel like a cake.
DIGESTIVE
Your chocolate chips are dripping.
A JAMMY DODGER STEPS WALKS PAST WITH AN ENTOURAGE OF GIGGLING AND FLIRTATIOUS PINK WAFERS.
JAMMY DODGER
Why don't we go somewhere quiet and make dessert?
DIGESTIVE
He certainly is jammy.
END.