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Loser

Just had this idea. Is there anything to work with here?

A VERY HIP TRENDY GUY WALKS INTO A CROWDED BAR. GIRLS FLOCK AROUND HIM. WE HEAR THE SOUNDS OF MOBILE PHONES GOING OFF. ANNOYING FROG TONES, NEW FUNKY MUSIC TONES, TARZAN CALLS ETC.

THE GUYS LEANS INTO TALK TO ONE OF THE GIRLS. HIS MOBILE RINGS. THE TONE IS OF AN OLD TRIMPHONE. THE GIRLS LOOKS AT HIM AND BACK[S] AWAY. THE WHOLE ROOM FALLS SILENT. HE TURNS AND WALKS OUT THE BAR IN DISGUST.

EDIT: added spaces to make more readable.

Hello Happy. I think the idea of an embarrassing ringtone could work but I don't think the trimphone is the way to go as I reckon Hipsters would actually think that was a good one.

Maybe go the other way with everyone else having cool or retro tones and the one with the crazy frog is the loser? Wait for more advice though from other peeps.

Good news: Very funny!:D

Bad news: :( Only to me (& a few others who had a trimphone!)

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"A VERY HIP TRENDY GUY" -- You in the 70s, right?

'HIP TRENDY' - soooooo yesterday (& the day before!)

Ha ha ha ha...I hope it had that distant quality.

No idea what a trimphone is. Had to Google it.

Happy, please use the space bar. It makes your posts easier to read. :)

Spelling and space bar.

Quote: SlagA @ November 27 2009, 3:36 PM GMT

Happy, please use the space bar.

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