British Comedy Guide

Ten Years Younger (sketch)

Cool

Removed by author while author remains able to remove it.

Excellent. I initially thought that the end should be at the handover of the baby but, on quick reflection, I think that the legging it is a nice toopper. It adds a somehow Pythonesque feel for me...which is a good thing.

Nice. Easy to imagine as a Keaton, Chaplin, or even a Marx Brothers' skit. Wonder what would exit if a baby entered that shop?

Nice.
Wonder what would exit if (the band) Ten Years After entered that shop?

That's top stuff Roodeye. Such a simple idea but really works for me.

Brill. Really simple and funny. :)

Great, as above particularly liked the police-boy running away ending.

Liking this very much Roodeye. Not much else to say, but the use of the silent setting is where this idea comes to life - as it allows the reader to picture exactly what you're aiming for.
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Thanks, guys.

It's the way I tell 'em. :D

Very, very good.

Only just read this.

Very nice indeed.

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