Super Duper Super Squad Part 2

Hello All

Part zwei of Super Duper Super Squad. It's now about 3 and a half minutes long and I'm about halfway to completing it. No music or sound fx added yet (except a not very good thunder sound fx that I'll be changing). Any criticisms on anything very much looked forward to.

Thanks for the comments last time round. As a result of those comments I redid the guy in the fluffy suit's voice (if it's still not good enough please tell me), got the mug to sound clearer (hopefully clear enough. If not, please tell me) and cut down on the amount of blinking from the characters (the blinking was distracting).

The link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JfjPtFrN4I0

Cheers to anyone who can take a look
Best wishes
Yac

Excellent work! I found it funny and I had no problem understanding the voices, the acting was very good in fact.

My only criticism is the Comms room and the TV bits are too washed out. I know it's meant to be dark (and the other guy's on TV) but I found the washed out-ey ness of it all distracting.

I'd agree with ShoePie's comment, the Comms Room bit needs to be brighter with more colour. The voice (of the bear bloke) is getting better and overall it's very enjoyable.

Cheers guys. On my home computer the level of darkness and contrast look fine, but checking it out from this internet cafe computer I can see, that yes, it's too much. Shall fix right away.

Any other comments regarding the look, sound, acting, whether it's funny, all that jazz welcome.

P.S. Hopefully this isn't too braggy but had a brief meeting with a CBBC producer regarding this animation. Will see if that goes anywhere.

Will check it out later tonight, but well done on the brief meeting.

Quote: Yacob Wingnut @ November 7 2009, 12:56 PM GMT

Any other comments regarding the look, sound, acting, whether it's funny, all that jazz welcome.

P.S. Hopefully this isn't too braggy but had a brief meeting with a CBBC producer regarding this animation. Will see if that goes anywhere.

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I really like the professor bloke on TVs voice, and energy. He struck me as the funniest. I do like the burnt weatherman too.

Great news, good luck with the meeting!

Really good stuff.

The blinking didn't get in the way this time!

Hope it all works out.

What software do you use just out of interest.

Is it me, or does the news reader sound like George off Rainbow?

Very good stuff, keep it up.

wow, this would make a brill series for TV with those characters