British Comedy Guide

Quickie

EXT. TRAIN STATION. DAY

A COUPLE SIT AT A TABLE, CLEARLY ANGRY WITH EACH OTHER. THEY ARE EMPTYING THERE POCKETS AND BAGS INTO A PILE IN THE CENTRE OF THE TABLE, APPARENTLY SEARCHING FOR SOMETHING.

THEY BOTH PRODUCE PAIRS OF GLASSES.

WOMAN
Snap!

SMUGLY SHE SWEEPS THE PILE OVER TO HER SIDE OF THE TABLE.

ENS

I like the idea but it could be better visualised or maybe have a longer build up.

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