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Enjoyed most of the scene Lee.

Although if you want a negative point, I thought the extended bit about the eyebrows dragged a bit.

But loved the way you described Mr Bibby.

Now I know what it feels like to be f**ked in the ass.

Thanks for your help on this guys. I've shortened the pitch - it goes on too long. The concensus seems to be that the script extract sells it. Cheers again.

Quote: Godot Taxis @ August 7 2009, 1:22 AM BST

Now I know what it feels like to be f**ked in the ass.

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What do you mean Godot?