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Nice Surprise - What Now?

Just back from Holiday.

Had a really nice break from any writing ambitions - apart from plotting out a children's historical novel type thing.

I'd left writing alone for a bit before I went.

I'd done 50,000 words of my book but there are still no takers - although my agent has only sent it to 10 publishing companies so far. She is hearing the same story - bad time for publishing, also I'm a man. Woman are in into weight loss - so the story has to be a woman, which is a bugger cos I didn't have a sex change.

So was getting down by that.

I'd run out ideas for NR / TS and didn't send anything for the last couple of runs.

So was generally feeling a bit negative about it all.

Then I come home and find an email from a major pro co - saying they liked the script I sent.

I could have fallen off my chair.

Basically it says they like what they read, but felt that the idea might not "run and run" as it comes to a natural end. But also felt that with a tweak could work.

They also said if I have anything further then I should send it over.

So what now?

This script was the first thing I had ever written comedy wise - before I started doing stuff for NR / TS etc.

I have done another sitcom since - which I feel is tonnes better.

The obvious thing is to send that over straight away with a CV.

But should I also ask if they want to see a script of the orginal sitcom but with a rework ( also they only read the pilot - this was not a mid series episode)

Any thoughts would be welcome as always.

Cheers All ( Nice to make away from 46degree heat and bush fires - Aaron would have hated it)

EDIT - Sorry that was the first thing I typed for three weeks - sorry for the typos and thanks to those who ploughed through it and got the idea of what I was saying.

I'll let someone more experienced answer. Just liked to say well done bigfella for getting positive feedback :).

Well, it seems they've told you what to do; have a go at tweaking the script they've read, so it's more obvious that it has legs as a show, and also think about sending them your new script. You don't need to show them a C.V.

Quote: bigfella @ August 2 2009, 3:52 PM BST

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So what now?

Give them a call and have a chat about it. See what's what.

Quote: Griff @ August 2 2009, 4:00 PM BST

Congratulations re the sitcom bigfella!

Once you've picked yourself up off the floor, I'd make sure you understand exactly what their concerns are regarding the first script before sending a rewrite. Couldn't hurt to arrange a brief phone chat to clarify things. During which you mention your second sitcom and ask if they would like to read that also?

EDIT: What Marc said.

Yeah, but Griff. Yours would make a better book...

Quote: Marc P @ August 2 2009, 3:59 PM BST

Give them a call and have a chat about it. See what's what.

A holiday and some good news! Christ I'm jealous.

Good luck though.

Thanks for the comments guys.

Talking to someone - that's a scary prospect, but yeah, I guess that's is what is needed.

Pretty obvious really.

Another task for tommorow then.

Any thoughts on how to approach it? A phone call first or a email to suggest a quick chat?

BTW - Read HE on holiday. Not bad at all!!! My daughter has started to read it which is a miracle in itself.

It is nice to get some good news when you get back from holiday - normally I get sued or something.

Just give themn a call bigfella, presumably there is a contact name on the letter. I am sure they will be more than happy to chat wih you about what they want. Bit odd if they didn't if you think about it!

Hope your daughter isn't put off reading meanwhile.

:)

Good news Bigfella, nice one :)

Major congratulations and well done BigFella. I wondered where you'd gone.

My only advice on top of that already given is to enjoy it. Don't spoilt the good feeling by worrying about what happens next. Your plans are coming together.

:) :) :)

Good work Bigfella - Marc's right, just give them a bell. They're interested in your work now so they won't fob you off. Remember, they're just people!

Who is it you're dealing with? I blush and flatter myself to say I might even know them.

Wow, that's great news. :) Congrats.

Congratulations. :D

Congrats big man :) that's great news

Well done, bigfella.

Did the suggest the 'tweaks'? If so, I'd chat to them some more about it, rewrite and send it in again. Ask if they'd mind reading the other script too.

Good luck with it.

Dan

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