Quote: sootyj @ July 27 2009, 11:31 PM BSTYou could fall over at the scene of a major disaster and appear on the news?
I threw a custard pie during the Italian earthquakes.
This comment needs more development. The basic premise is there but it feels like a rushed job to me. Good luck with your future efforts. 
Quote: The Giggle-o @ July 27 2009, 11:33 PM BSTThis comment needs more development. The basic premise is there but it feels like a rushed job to me. Good luck with your future efforts.
I really like the idea of ironic banter..but this feels far to real there's no surprise or punchline.
You've written better, sorry.
Quote: sootyj @ July 27 2009, 11:35 PM BSTI really like the idea of ironic banter..but this feels far *to* real there's no surprise or punchline.
You've written better, sorry.
Realism is everything Sooty.
Why won't anyone let me keep my j? I like my j.
Quote: The Giggle-o @ July 27 2009, 11:39 PM BSTRealism is everything *Sootyj*.
There you go cry baby. 
Quote: sootyj @ July 27 2009, 11:41 PM BSTWhy won't anyone let me keep my j? I like my j.
I like a good j.
Quote: Nil Putters @ July 27 2009, 11:48 PM BSTI like a good j.
Have you heard of alphabetti spaghetti? You might like it.
Or Smarties.
Quote: The Giggle-o @ July 27 2009, 11:51 PM BSTHave you heard of alphabetti spaghetti? You might like it.
Yeah, I'm going for a b to complete the collection.
Quote: zooo @ July 27 2009, 11:56 PM BSTOr Smarties.
Other than in critique where else have people read each other's work?
Quote: Nil Putters @ July 27 2009, 11:48 PM BSTI like a good j.
That reminds me...
*rolls*
All I have to say is that Feedback never did Jimi Hendrix any harm.
Quote: Marc P @ July 28 2009, 8:26 AM BSTAll I have to say is that Feedback never did Jimi Hendrix any harm.
Are you sure? Didn't he choke to death?
Quote: JohnnyD @ July 28 2009, 8:48 AM BSTAre you sure? Didn't he choke to death?
Quote: Marc P @ July 28 2009, 8:26 AM BSTAll I have to say is that Feedback never did Jimi Hendrix any harm.
