Quote: Geoff Mutton @ July 23 2009, 7:44 AM BSTGood work Pedros.
After "Don't make me angry", I could see where this was going but couldn't predict the ending. That's good.
Trim the dialogue and lose the swearing. I'd also like to hear the Green Giant's trademark "Ho, Ho, Ho!" booming out at the end.
Very good piece, nonetheless.
I can't help the swearing, it's the result of a poor education and a lack of vocabulary. Besides, I think it makes me sound cool 