British Comedy Guide

Quickie

INT. DIMLY-LIT BEDROOM. NIGHT.

CLOSE UP OF BOTTOM OF BED, LIMBS ARE MOVING UNDER THE QUILT.

FX BEDSPRINGS GOING, MAN AND WOMAN REACHING ORGASM. CIGARETTE LIGHTER BEING USED.

MAN'S VOICE: (O.O.V.)
Maybe we should try doing it in somewhere other than the bedroom , you know, to spice things up a bit.

PULL BACK TO REVEAL MAN AND WOMAN GETTING OUT OF BED. THEY ARE DRESSED AS BURGLARS.

THEY START PUTTING A LAPTOP, DVD PLAYER AND JEWELLERY BOX INTO A BAG AND CLIMB OUT THE WINDOW.

END.

The words "Quickie" and "Nigel Kelly" in tandem usually excite me. But this one doesn't hit my spot I'm afraid.

No probs Badge, thanks.

I liked the idea there. And it OK as it is. But I feel as though it can be made better. Not sure how though. Pleased

No, this did nothing for me either Nigel.

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