Kind of unsure about this one. Good enough ending? Too obvious? These are just some of the worries.
All comments appreciated.
INT. A ROOM - DAY
5 people are sat in a circle looking at the group leader.
GROUP LEADER
Ok gang. We've made a lot of progress today so let's try and step it up a notch. You ready?
EVERYONE
Yes!
GROUP LEADER
Great. Ok, repeat after me.
Group leader holds up a card with a picture of a dragon on it.
GROUP LEADER
Not real.
EVERYONE
Not real.
Group leader holds up a card with a picture of a unicorn on it.
GROUP LEADER
Not real.
EVERYONE
Not real.
GROUP LEADER
Great, you're all doing really well. Are we ready for the next one.
Group leader holds up a card with a picture of father Christmas on it.
GROUP LEADER
Not real.
EVERYONE
Not real.
A woman jumps up and runs out of the room crying.
WOMAN
(Screaming)
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