Marc P
Wednesday 26th August 2009 4:11pm [Edited]
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Quote: Marc P @ August 26 2009, 12:32 PM BST
Paste one of your examples here and I will show you.
Here's your first page fiddled about with to bring the emphasis out without underlining.
[GEMMA FURIOUSLY SLAMS THE FRIDGE DOOR AND RIPS A CAN OF COKE OPEN]
GEMMA:
So… Mum! When were you actually going to tell us?
ANNIE:
I was waiting for the right moment...
GEMMA:
When? When we'd both grown up and left home and had children of our own?
ANNIE:
Of course not…
GEMMA:
(INTERRUPTING) I can't believe you'd take Dad back after what he did to you?
ANNIE:
I haven't taken him back. I've simply let him move
into the spare room, I couldn't leave him out on the
street could I?
GEMMA:
Why not? Worried he wouldn't keep his cardboard box clean?
ANNIE:
He'd never survive in Cardboard City.
[GEMMA GLARES AT CHELSEA]
GEMMA:
It's Bristol City you should have worried about. And it wasn't your fault or Gordon Brown's that he got repossessed you know!