Feedback needed

Hi I have written a Sitcom Pilot but don't really have anyone who can give me constructive feedback.

In all honesty I don't want to but it on the Critique forum.

Can anyone recomend someone on the site who gives good contructive feedback?

Thanks

Hi backofthenet.

People might PM you from your post here and you could send it to them.

Can't recommend anyone who would do it for free and give the best feedback.

Pay Marc Blake. I think that's his name. I think he gives a discount to site members.

Moving thread to a forum related to writing.

James Williams is your man (not).

Quote: backofthenet @ June 29 2009, 5:54 PM BST

Hi I have written a Sitcom Pilot but don't really have anyone who can give me constructive feedback.

In all honesty I don't want to but it on the Critique forum.

Can anyone recomend someone on the site who gives good contructive feedback?

Thanks

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Try LIME5000.

But if you do not have anyone to give you feedback, that is what Critique is for. And to give the rest of us a laugh, one way or the other. Post a couple of scenes in Critique and see if anyone shows an interest in seeing the rest.

Alternatively as Aaron says, pay someone with some established expertise for providing a service.