"High Stan. Off down the cemetary again, are you?"
STAN
"Yep, best place to find a replacement, innit."
You into a bit of necro then, are you?"
"Nah, I chat up the widows."
"High Stan. Off down the cemetary again, are you?"
STAN
"Yep, best place to find a replacement, innit."
You into a bit of necro then, are you?"
"Nah, I chat up the widows."
It's not a bad idea but the execution seems off.
It's sort of back to front. In that the shock would be necro.
Thanks. DEAD right!
I think I must take a little bit of credit for a Window Shopping spin-off
and not sure why sooty think's it's back to front. I think it's pretty good.
Perhaps make it out like he think's he means replacing a headstone?
Also fix structure. Unless STAN is talking to himself
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STANS FRIEND
"Hey Stan. Off down the cemetary again, are you?"
STAN
"Yep, best place to find a replacement, innit."
STANS FRIEND
Those vandals at your Alice's headstone egain?
STAN
"Nah, I chat up the widows."