British Comedy Guide

Widow Shopping

"High Stan. Off down the cemetary again, are you?"

STAN
"Yep, best place to find a replacement, innit."

You into a bit of necro then, are you?"

"Nah, I chat up the widows."

It's not a bad idea but the execution seems off.

It's sort of back to front. In that the shock would be necro.

Thanks. DEAD right!

I think I must take a little bit of credit for a Window Shopping spin-off :D

and not sure why sooty think's it's back to front. I think it's pretty good.

Perhaps make it out like he think's he means replacing a headstone?

Also fix structure. Unless STAN is talking to himself ;)
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STANS FRIEND
"Hey Stan. Off down the cemetary again, are you?"

STAN
"Yep, best place to find a replacement, innit."

STANS FRIEND
Those vandals at your Alice's headstone egain?

STAN
"Nah, I chat up the widows."

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