Quote: Kasm @ October 12 2009, 1:32 PM BSTMarc P is spot-on with what drives most people to buy something - what's in it for me?
You could try something along the lines of:
You too can transform your life
(How I lost almost half my body weight)
I like it, but its not really that sort of book.
It's not a you should do what I did book.
It's what my wife calls a misery book - albit it with a positive ending.
Cast the First Stone
From Sinner to Slimmer.
The vanishing man - From big macs to healthy snacks.
Quote: Marc P @ October 12 2009, 2:15 PM BSTCast the First Stone
From Sinner to Slimmer.
Bless you my child!
Quote: Nigel Kelly @ October 12 2009, 2:15 PM BSTThe vanishing man - From big macs to healthy snacks.
Isn't a Big Mac healthy? 
'HEAVYWEIGHT'
Big fella's warts and all account of how he was told to diet or die certainly pulls no punches.
The Incredible Shrinking Man.
Quote: Marc P @ October 12 2009, 2:22 PM BST'HEAVYWEIGHT'
Big fella's warts and all account of how he was told to diet or die certainly pulls no punches.
This is getting closer to the mark. Marc!
Five years was all I was given if I didn't have the operation.
A Slim Chance
Quote: Nil Putters @ October 12 2009, 2:22 PM BSTThe Incredible Shrinking Man.
Nice.
DIET HARD
Quote: Morrace @ October 12 2009, 2:30 PM BSTDIET HARD
Quote: Tim Walker @ October 12 2009, 2:25 PM BSTA Slim Chance
Or A Slimfast Chance
On a different note. What about editing, any ideas where I can someone to edit it? Someone who won't break the bank?
Quote: Morrace @ October 12 2009, 2:30 PM BSTDIET HARD
Quote: bigfella @ October 12 2009, 2:32 PM BST
???
Story of my life; I try to be serious, I get a . (& vice-versa!)
BODY OF EVIDENCE
The doctors told me I faced a death sentence unless I turned my life around. This is the true story of how I beat the rap.
Quote: bigfella @ October 12 2009, 2:34 PM BSTOn a different note. What about editing, any ideas where I can someone to edit it? Someone who won't break the bank?
What does you agent say BF, if you get a publisher they will edit. Speak to her about ebooks it could be a way in. No printing or packaging or delivery etc. Just converting into the right file and away you go. Someone will be more likely to take a chance on that, especially if you tie it in with the show on TV airing.