Not too sure about this one -
An office. A typist is at a computer, when a message pops up.
A FATAL ERROR HAS OCCURED...
Death appears behind the typist and types a few random keys.
DEATH:
Nah, that's buggered.
He slices the monitor in two, and leaves whistling.
Very strong idea. But I'd make it man pearing at the monitor whilst Death slices up the CPU.
An office. A typist is at a computer, when a message pops up.
A FATAL ERROR HAS OCCURED...
Death appears behind the typist, and moves to the computer tower.
DEATH:
Tell me if there's any change.
Typist stares at the monitor. Death raises his scythe and slices the tower in two. he peers at the monitor.
DEATH:
Nah, that's buggered.
He leaves whistling.
END.
Comme ca?
I like the idea. Think you can do a lot of computer jokes with it. How about after Death scythes it and leaves, a colleague leans over and says 'You know you don't get that with a Mac'