INT. BATHROOM. DAY.
A MAN IS BRUSHING HIS TEETH WITH AN ELECTRIC TOOTHBRUSH. HE FINISHES BRUSHING AND BEGINS FLOSSING.
THERE IS AN ELECTRONIC BEEPING NOISE. THE MAN LOOKS PUZZLED, THEN SEES THAT THE RECHARGING LIGHT ON HIS TOOTHBRUSH IS FLASHING. HE ROLLS HIS EYES.
A LORRY REVERSES THROUGH THE BATHROOM WALL.
END.
Off the wall! Great!
That's great. Truly great. Probably best served in animation though.
Short and hilarious.
Very nice.
Very very good.
Could do with some polish.
Fine Mark!
Leck Vallensa is brushing his teeth in Warsaw.
That enough Polish for you?
Hmmm. Too much padding.
Just kidding. Lovely quickie.
Tim, your work often reminds me of Douglas Adams.
Another great sketch.
Yeah, very good. Agree about the animation too. Probably cheaper than building a set and having a lorry reverse through a wall.
Though if you could get a really bad comedian run over, I'd probably go with that one...
Dan
Cheers guys. I agree it might not be the most practical sketch to film.