British Comedy Guide

Quickie

INT. DAY. ROOM.

A MAN LIES DEAD ON THE FLOOR. THERE IS BLOOD EVERYWHERE. THE ROOM IS A MESS.

DETECTIVE:
Poor bastard. Ok, I want a full forensic investigation in here. DNA swabs, fingerprints, hair folicles, the works. I don't want my crime scene being contaminated so no one in here without the proper gear on. Right, lets get to work.

DETECTIVE PULLS TAPE ACROSS ROOM ENTRANCE AND FRONT DOOR.

A RUNNER WITH HANDS IN THE AIR CROSSES TAPE, ENTERS ROOM, FOLLOWED BY OTHER RUNNERS.

Laughing out loud I like it.

Nice visual gag you could lose the dialogue.

Brilliant.

Very good stuff!

Cheers me dears.

Quote: sootyj @ April 26 2009, 10:44 PM BST

Nice visual gag you could lose the dialogue.

I agree with Sootyj.

1) It will make the sketch tighter.
2) Worldwide sales potential.

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I have a suspicion I've just been insulted (beat) again.

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