Does anyone fancy writing a joint sketch on here? Page 18

Quote: swerytd @ April 21 2009, 2:35 PM BST

Sorry -- have a job during the day

Dan

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Ahh, that Dan. I thought it was someone else.

I've posted the sketch and sitcom scene in critique - they're totally different from each other this time.

Please add any real feedback to the critique thread to avoid arguments on here!

I'm interested to hear from the originators in particular as I think they've both changed quite a bit from the original versions.

Feel free to post any interim versions too as others may find it interesting to see how different writers take them in totally different directions, with each version having something unique to offer.

Thanks again

Jx