One Slagg met Dolly at the Yielding bash and she is as lovely as her avatar... I've been told.
Formatting Question Page 2
Quote: Seefacts @ April 7 2009, 10:14 PM BSTOooooo-OOOOOOOOOOOOOO-ooooooo!
Etc.
I'm not one to edit Mr S but shouldn't there be an H in there here and there?
Quote: Marc P @ April 7 2009, 11:50 PM BSTI'm not one to edit Mr S but shouldn't there be an H in there here and there?
What, like 'Ohhhh'?
No, certainly not.
I can confirm that Dolly is beautiful,lovely and clever and she didn't pay me to say that. 
Quote: Loopey @ April 8 2009, 11:09 AM BSTI can confirm that Dolly is beautiful,lovely and clever and she didn't pay me to say that.
*blushes* (the cheque's in the post Loopey!)
Quote: SlagA @ April 7 2009, 10:25 PM BSTOne Slagg met Dolly at the Yielding bash
Ah yes. If I remember rightly I asked him and his friends to escort me to the station and they rather ungallantly left me half way when they found a bar!
I'm with Dolly. Separate numbered scenes, and CUT TO isn't necessary. A director will do a camera script in due course. Money well spent, Dolly!
I've actually got rid of the CUT TO: bit now and instead used it as the end of scene 1.
Thanks for all the help though.
Quote: Micheal Jacob @ April 8 2009, 12:18 PM BSTA director will do a camera script in due course.
I can but dream.
Quote: Ben @ April 8 2009, 1:02 PM BSTThanks for all the help though.
You're welcome Ben.
Quote: Micheal Jacob @ April 8 2009, 12:18 PM BSTI'm with Dolly. Separate numbered scenes, and CUT TO isn't necessary. A director will do a camera script in due course. Money well spent, Dolly!
I think I'll use this quote in my signature. Now will people believe me?
Quote: Ben @ April 8 2009, 1:02 PM BSTI've actually got rid of the CUT TO: bit now and instead used it as the end of scene 1.
If it is specifically related to a visual joke, then a few directions are important though.
Quote: Matthew Stott @ April 8 2009, 1:16 PM BSTa few directions are important though.
Is that called signposting a joke?
Quote: Marc P @ April 8 2009, 1:32 PM BSTIs that called signposting a joke?
Well, a visual joke. If a hard cut is important to make the visual funny work, then it's fine to put it in there.
Quote: Marc P @ April 8 2009, 1:32 PM BSTIs that called signposting a joke?
And I just got the gag here. Maybe a few more obvious directions would have made thickos like me get it quicker!
Quote: Matthew Stott @ April 8 2009, 1:35 PM BSTWell, a visual joke. If a hard cut is important to make the visual funny work, then it's fine to put it in there.
And I just got the gag here. Maybe a few more obvious directions would have made thickos like me get it quicker!
Quote: Matthew Stott @ April 8 2009, 1:16 PM BSTIf it is specifically related to a visual joke, then a few directions are important though.
Oh there's still some of them there. Don't you worry, baby.
Quote: Ben @ April 8 2009, 1:48 PM BSTDon't you worry, baby.
I like it when you call me baby.
Quote: Matthew Stott @ April 8 2009, 1:49 PM BSTI like it when you call me baby.
Is it because you've got an overly large head and undescended testicles? 