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Hi,

I liked this sketch a lot. The reveal of the clown is very funny. I'd keep the original ending as the sketch sets it up.

One way you could do it is...

MANAGER IS GASPING UNDER HIS DESK AFTER THE STRONG MAN'S EMBRACE. UNDER THE DESK HE SEES A HUGE PAIR OF CLOWNS FEET WALK INTO THE ROOM.
CUT TO:
MANAGER PEERING OVER THE TOP OF HIS DESK ANXIOUSLY.

CUT TO:

CLOWN SOBBING BUT WITHOUT TEARS. THE CLOWN SQUEEZES THE BULB ON HIS FLOWER AND BOTH WATCH AS WATER SQUIRTS FROM THE FLOWER ONTO THE MANAGERS DESK

MANAGER: Er...Typing?

CLOWN SHAKES HIS HEAD SADLEY AND BEGINS TO CRY HARDER. MANAGER HANDS HIM A TISSUE. THE CLOWN SILENTLY BLOWS HIS NOSE AND HONKS THE HORN AS HE DOES SO, MIMICKING THE NOSE BLOW.

MANAGER BURSTS INTO TEARS.

ENDS

John Burns
Purple Comedy http://standupcomedy.podomatic.com/

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