Although I haven't posted about them for a while I have been keeping up with the writing of Gibb and Will scripts so there are ones up now that people won't know about (thought it would be better this way rather than posting each time I wrote a new one). Feel free to take a look, a new one will be going up tonight.
Google it
Short snappy, liked it had a nice place and was easy to read
Dive in
Again good pacing I prefered the google one but then its a bit geeky with lycos and altavista etc
Certain Truths
I liked this one made me laugh. You seem to have a nice formula for this type of humour I wonder would you consider expanding the world of Gibb and Will and putting them into a whole episode or maybe just a situation first see how they fair 
see how the characters develop etc
Do you know Gavin, I have been thinking of doing that for a while. I'm just trying to work out in my head how to create a lengthy episode but keeping the original elements that make it work. I'm still not sure whether I would be able to pull it off
K I've put another Gibb and Will up now and I've also done a quick football sketch in the bits and pieces section if you want to take a look
Foot ball one was really good was very original which is good in our game.
LOL the dog poo Gibb and Will started a little slow but really got its rhythym by the end it was good not one of the best but certainly up there with my favourites. Maybe you could have Gibb and Will making a cameo in a sitcom rather then them having a whole half hour dedicated to themselves. Bit like Jay and Silent bob were in the Jersey Trilogy..ahh but they had their own film mmmm
Cheers for the replies Gavin. I'll keep thinking about the development of Gibb and Will, I'm sure something will come along if it's meant to.
I agree with Gavin. I like these little sketches, but think they'd work better popping in a story or something rather than as individual sketches. Like Gav says, perhaps breaking up a story line. I think your on to something, but it's just what to do with them...
I wasn't sure about the diving one, but the Google one made me laugh. And the bit at the end of certain truths where the stick didn't come down, 'o no, there it is'. Classic. Some good lines in the dog poo one too.
I liked the footie one and the Certain Truths one was the better of the trio of Gibb and Will. For me, Google was the slow-burner. But saying that, I don't want you thinking I didn't like that one, I did like it. Have you had offers to animate yet? Also how do you pdf them? That's really neat.
Cheers Slag.
No I haven't I've asked a couple of animators and whilst they like the scripts they seem pretty busy, which is fair enough, we all are. The pdf thigy I have is v cool, really easy to use. It's called cute pdf and you can download it for free. Then, from your word document you just click print and select cute pdf from the printer drop down box, select where you want to save it and it makes a pdf copy.
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I think he was intending to edit it. I saw him earlier bumping quite a few threads, I thought he was doing an inoffensive version of donut.
It was to get these threads in front of donnut's so people could read them, thats why. But there gone now so I look like a doughnut, doh!
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