lol
Did make me laugh some and some more!
Do agree re: the pun ending. As with others, I kinda felt the end let down such a perfect sketch.
Quality!
lol
Did make me laugh some and some more!
Do agree re: the pun ending. As with others, I kinda felt the end let down such a perfect sketch.
Quality!
'Working' from home, this tickled me especially. I like Kevin's suggestion of the Porn Goblin turning out to be an intruder or somin. But it certainly works as is.
A work of genius pretty much perfect.
I could see Mathew Horne as a porn goblin.
And James Corden as Steve?
Is this a true story Lee?
I see Corden as more likely to be taking part in a tragic and bloody siege at a Greggs.
Quote: sootyj @ March 11 2009, 11:21 AM GMTA work of genius pretty much perfect.
Sootys got a Hen-crush.
Perfect. Don't fiddle with it
Quote: Marc P @ March 11 2009, 11:25 AM GMTIs this a true story Lee?
Hah! I don't need porn goblins to coerce me into a fiddle...
I thought that was good. One suggestion- a bit more convincing needed for him to have a wank. It is in front of a stranger after all...
Could it be improved and tightened? Probably.
But is it the best sketch I have read on this forum? Absolutely.
Brilliant sketch!