Ok this is the beginning I think of my Newest episode. Dunno what I think to be honest any views would be appreciated.
Basic ep premise the council decide to trap the tourist they have in the town and to re-educate the townsfolk so their more accommodating. Dad gets addicted to console gaming doesn’t notice family get carted away for educating ends in either invasion of body snatchers way of 28 days later... You know running round streets shouting HALLLLLOOO whilst all the towns’ people are crammed in tourist hotel room making sure their having a good time.
Any huw not written in a while it's first draft so all the people I was a bit harsh with critique on nows your chance to Let it rip LOL
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INT. MAYORS OFFICE - MORNING
From behind his huge leather chair the mayors spindled finger hits the intercom. He speaks in a manner not to dissimilar from Christopher Lee.
MAYOR
Roger! ROGER!!! Come here boy!
The large doors open to his office and a short portly man shuffles in looking nervous. This is Roger long suffering right hand man of the Mayor.
ROGER
Yes my Lord
MAYOR
Roger my heart Bleeds
ROGER
Sir?
MAYOR
My Beaches are empty, my novelty shops are boarded up and my Knick Knack shops are deserted. Where are the Tourists Roger? The gimp faced consumers of anything.
ROGER
Well Sir if you had read the report, tourism has been on a steady decline for a number of
years.
MAYOR
I don’t have time to read you fantisful writings Roger. It’s them I can guarantee it
The mayor rises from his chair he wears the full mayor outfit and looks like a skeksi. He glares out of his huge office balcony window.
ROGER
Them Sir?
MAYOR
The peasants Roger, The peasants. Always trying to scupper my plans for a perfect town. Well no Matter I am prepared. How much of the tourism budget remains?
ROGER
Sir we’re currently 2.8 Million over budget since you decided to build the Summer Chamber. The public are at a loss to understand why their council tax has been increased again this year.
MAYOR
How could they understand?
A Council Guard walks into the office dragging a large handcuffed man behind him.
COUNCIL GUARD
Sire, This fat, arrogant, possibly intoxicated town's person has just insulted a valued tourist Sire.
MAYOR
You see Roger? This creature could of said anything to our tourist friend.
(TO THE GUARD)
Take this one to the chamber for re-education.
MAYOR
(TO ROGER)
Roger how many tourists do we have in our beloved town?
ROGER
About One hundred and fifty sir
MAYOR
Then we will ensure that they have the greatest weekend of their lives.
The mayor hits his intercom button.
MAYOR
(INTO INTERCOM)
Begin roadworks on all mayor roads in the town.
The mayor releases the intercom button.
MAYOR
It will take so long to get anywhere the tourists will be forced to stay in the town. We will milk them for every penny that they have.
ROGER
SIR! Road works of that scale will require a work force of atleast a hundred men.
MAYOR
One Thousand Men!
ROGER
But sir such a force does not exist!
The mayor walks out onto his balcony overlooking the outside Lobby. Lined up in perfect formation are one thousand council workers. Their aluminous shirts shine
proudly in the sun. We can see in the front row is the fat man who was sent away for re-education, he looks like he’s had his brain sucked out with a straw.
MAYOR
Go now my minions keep the tourist within our borders!!
The workers all cheer.
INT. NEWMANS HOUSE - EVENING
Mike and Lance sit on the couch watching TV. Sara bursts into the house through the front door flustered.
MIKE
Where have you been? We’re starving
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Edit coz that was quite a task to read through here is a smiley for your troubles 
ahh go on here's another 
