British Comedy Guide

Surgery Checklist

A short sketch quickly cobbled together.

INT. OPERATING THEATRE - DAY

TWO SURGEONS AND A NURSE DRESSED IN SCRUBS SURROUND AN OPERATING TABLE ON WHICH LIES A PATIENT.

NURSE
Now before we begin we have to run through this new checklist to make sure everything is as it should be.

SURGEON 1
If we must.

NURSE
One, are we in a hospital?

THE LOOK AROUND. THERE IS MUTTERED AGREEMENT

NURSE
Good. Two, are we surgeons, doctors or other qualified medical staff required to carry out the imminent operation?

AGAIN MUTTERED AGREEMENT

SURGEON 2
Actually, I'm a brick layer. Should I not be here?

NURSE
Erm... it doesn't mention brick layers.

SURGEON 1
He can stay if he wants, doesn't bother me.

NURSE
I think you'll have to go - just to be on the safe side. Sorry about that.

THE BUILDER SHRUGS AND LEAVES

NURSE
Three, have you washed your hands?

SURGEON 1
What, ever?

NURSE
Doesn't say. I think it probably means today at least though that is a guess.

SURGEON 1
Let's think -I was definitely in the gents, I remember because last night's curry came back at me with a vengeance - shitting steam I was. Arse like a Japanese flag.

NURSE
And your hands?

SURGEON 1
(WIPING HANDS ON GOWN) Just say yes. Next.

NURSE
Four, have you had an alcoholic drink the last 24 hours?

SURGEON 1
Ah! Well reminded.

THE SURGEON TAKES OUT A HIP FLASK AND TAKES A SWIG.

SURGEON 1
Ah, that;'s the stuff. Nothing like a nip of absinthe to focus the mind, eh?

HE OFFERS IT TO THE NURSE.

NURSE
Absolutely

SHE TAKES THE FLASK AND HAS A GULP.

Hoo Hah! Now, where were we? Twelve. Is your landing gear in working order?

THEY LOOK AT EACH OTHER. THE SURGEON'S HAND MOVES SLOWLY TO HIS CROTCH.

SURGEON 1
No complaints.

NURSE
Thirteen. Check your flaps.

THEY LOOK AT EACH OTHER. THE NURSE'S HAND BEGINS TO MOVE TO HER CROTCH BUT SHE STOPS.

NURSE
You know I think these checklist may have got mixed up somehow.

SURGEON 1
I think you're right. I mean, all that stuff about washing your hands - pfft, Who are they - my mum?

THEY LAUGH. THE NURSE THROWS AWAY THE CHECKLIST.

SURGEON 1
Right, let's get this fat bastard carved open. Nurse, would pass me the trowel and spirit level please.

THEY LOOK AT EACH OTHER.

SURGEON 1
Go get him.

END

Hi, for me it doesn't quite work.

I like the idea of the check list being an preflight take of. But It starts of with the stuff about the hospital and qualified medical personal first - so for me doesn't flow well.

Likewise. I think you may have crammed too much in. You might try going with just the mixed up lists?

Cheers for reading chaps, and the comments.

Bo.

I'm not an avid consumer of topical comedy, but this read well with some decent chuckles. I think the killer sketch would be say 5 questions that could apply to both surgery and another profession (the more incongruous the better); the reveal/ punchline being a question that obviously relates to that other profession.

This made me laugh, particularly the flaps line. Possibly it could be a little more focussed, but it is funny, so hey!

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