JOB LOSSES
WE SEE A MAN IN THE DISTANCE WITH A GUN TO HIS HEAD.TWO MEN ARE IN THE FOREGROUND TALKING.
1ST MAN:What's going on?
2nd MAN
ays he can't take it anymore, let everyone down
its all his fault these job losses.
1ST MAN:Things must be bad?
2nd MAN:Yeah, MFI, JCB, M+S the guy's convinced his job's next.
1st MAN:What does he do?
2nd MAN:He's the CEO of the acronym society.
IN THE DISTANCE WE SEE HEAR A LOUD BANG.
Genius have him shoot himself and it's got NR written all over it.
Thanks for that.I might just not whizz it off to NR.
Yeap I like that to!
Nice take on the saga!
Quote: sootyj @ January 15 2009, 10:59 AM GMTGenius have him shoot himself and it's got NR written all over it.
Have now edited first draft.
Ooh good spot!
Abreviation society?
Acronym it is then.
Doesn't an acronym have to spell out a word though? Like A.I.D.S?
IN THE DISTANCE WE SEE WOULD BE SKETCH WRITER WITH GUN AT HEAD. 
Maybe the guy who's company makes abbreviatied shop signs?
It's clunky, but it does say exactly what's meant.
How many real acronyms do people use?
e.g. where the abreviation is actually a meaningful word.
SKETCH WRITER NOW WEARY BEATEN AND DEJECTED HANGS HEAD IN SHAME AND SOBS. 
Quote: steve @ January 15 2009, 12:08 PM GMTSKETCH WRITER NOW WEARY BEATEN AND DEJECTED HANGS HEAD IN SHAME AND SOBS.
Welcome to critique!
If its up here everyone has every right to rip it to bits.Thats the name of
game and if folks don't want thier stuff lambasted[is that the correct spelling Griff?] then don't put it on here. 
I'm not just thick, I'm thick skinned aswell I'll have you know. 
Griff,I have no problem at all if you or anyone else wants rip my sketch to bits.Thats what its all about.