Have posted this before, but there were problems with the link
It's a radio show that I presented with a friend of mine. It's banter rather than comedy, but would appreciate any comments
Short Radio Clip
There's some funny stories in there...but not sure what kind of feedback you're looking for. As a sketch-type thing, obviously there's nothing there...as a radio show, it sounds very Community Radio, like you want a career in radio and your mate has said "ooh, mate, we'd be brilliant doing a show together, we have SUCH a laugh", and suddenly you realise that you don't have to force the comedy and the banter as much as this in normal life so it becomes slightly stifled.
Just a guess...but I liked the A&E bit, that has some sketch potential.
Cheers Tom
You've got it about right. I'm persuing a radio career (as well as other things) and we just did a couple of shows together, when I ran out of other guests/material etc
While some of the convo was forced (ie, one of us would come to the show and start talking about a prepared subject) the other one never knew what subjects the other had lined up, so the reactions were genuine
I've removed the link for now as I am updating the clip with a slightly different edit.
Don't think I'm being harsh at all...I'm a radio presenter myself, y'see, and I was interested to see your stuff. I think there's potential there but you need to think more like Radio presenters and less like Blokes In The Pub Having A Laugh(tm).
The A&E thing would make the start of a rather funny segment on the show...have a special phone ring whereby the person on the other end has dialled a wrong number.
I look forward to hearing some more material from you, all the same.