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Quote: Mav42 @ January 7 2009, 11:05 AM GMT

I think it needs something else.

Perhaps if he starts asking her perverted questions in a rigorously professional way.

But maybe that would be embellishing it too much.

I think it would. As it stands it's short and to the perverted point. A very nice sketch.

Thanks Baumski, much appreciated.

I think what this thread shows is that with a basic idea you can either have a short, almost one liner or a longer sketch. Both of which work equally as well.

I think I like the short version best. Sometimes less is more (more or less).

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