http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=EKOKfxepEUo
Do not look at the previous 2, unless you really want to be tortured by hideous cliche's, dire camera work with an equally dire camera and real cringe. Just, don't.
This is still pretty low down the scale, I know, but it's an attempt to show some of the crap I've done with some people.
I'd massively appreciate all criticism about the writing if possible; sadly as only my friends have really commented on it, I tend to get positivie feedback and no decent negatives. Oh, by the way, I know all about it's other flaws and the camerawork etc. is nothing to do with me, so