British Comedy Guide

Visual one

A quick visual idea, may be suited to animation:

EXT. DAY. MOTORWAY.

TWO BUSINESSMEN ARE DRIVING IN OUTSIDE LANE.

DRIVER:
This new venture of ours, its big time isn't it?

PASSENGER:
To be honest, I'm not sure, it's..

HE GLANCES ACROSS TO SEE THAT THEY ARE BEING PASSED ON THE INSIDE LANE BY A
CONVERTIBLE DRIVEN BY A WOOLLY MAMMOTH.

PASSENGER:
... a mammoth undertaking?

Very good! Made me chortle!

Nice play on words, but I think it could be even simpler and shorter.

Laughing out loud

Nice one Nigel.

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