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INT. SEATS AT A SHOW

TWO WOMEN ARE SAT IN SEATS WATCHING A SHOW CAMERA IS ON THEM BUT YOU CAN'T SEE THE STAGE. THEY WHISPER TO EACH OTHER.

WOMAN 1
I don't think much of the lead

WOMAN 2
Tell me about it. I saw the show last year but this cast are appalling, there is absolutely zero chemistry between those two

WOMAN 1
I've had time off work to come here today, I mean wheres the charisma, the x factor...

WOMAN 2
Oh God shes only forgot her bloody lines

WOMAN 2 GETS UP AND SHOUTS

WOMAN 2
Get off, your shit!

CAMERA PANS TO KIDS AT A NATIVITY. MARY STARTS TO CRY AND RUNS OFF STAGE. EVERYONE TURNS AND LOOKS AT THE WOMAN

WOMAN 2
It's ok. She's mine

ENDS

First thing, you've got woman2 saying 2 consecutive lines, both which start with "tell me about it". You've also put "forgotted".

My only problem with it was that as soon as the line "my 2 year old could do a better job", I pretty much figured it out, so I would drop that bit if I were you.

Even though I knew what was going on that last line still made me chuckle so I think if you do that little bit of tinkering it should be good.

forgotted! lol!

sorry, I have edited it now.

I think most people would know what was coming but hopefully still laugh anyway!

A bit like Harry Hill with his Alexandra Burke reaction tonight.

A bit of a classic, but nicely handled.

Nicely done but it is a classic.

Brings back memories of primary school.