Sorry for the double post earlier here, my internet broke and i didn't realize it had put up my last thread.
I will post up the beginning soon, thanks 
Posting Up Scripts
Were the answers to your other post not good enough? Was the fact that a moderator closed the thread not some sort of hint?
Either post some of your script or don't. You're just going to annoy people if you keep posting the same question without actually posting any work.
Sorry about that. Explained above. 
Thanks Gully, please don't ask any further questions in critique, it's just for posting material.
If you have further questions go to the writers room please