British Comedy Guide

A deliberate attempt at over writing.

DAVE AND JEMIMA ARE IN A VERY ROUGH PUB.

JEMIMA

Ooh Dave isn't it super to find a real old East End boozer, so close to our Dockland's maisonette.

DAVID

I know it's just like it's out of the Sweeney. Mind you they only serve Stella, Stella or Imperial bastard vodka.

JEMIMA

It's like Eastenders, I wander if Pat will be serving at the bar.

A VERY ROUGH LOOKING BARMAID COMES OVER WITH SOME SHEETS OF PAPER.

BARMAID

Oi do you want to take part in Big Dave the C**ts' quiz?

LOCALS DRINK UP AND LEAVE, APART FROM A HARDENED FEW WHO HANG ON TO WATCH THE SPECTACLE. THE LOCALS ARE TAKING BETS.

LOCAL1

He loses an eye.

LOCAL2

Nah he keep's his eyes but the shandy drinker loses both testicles.

LOCAL3

Fink he'll rape her.

LOCAL1

I always thought Dave was gay.

LOCAL2

On account of being to f**king hard to f**k a woman.

DAVID

Well we both want to Cambridge.

JEMIMA

And I read Heat and Cosmo bet we'll have a chance.

BARMAID

You will, you're the only bleeding team.

DAVID

Who exactly is Big Dave the...

BARMAID

The c**t, that's him over there.

BIG DAVE IS SITTING AT A TABLE WITH A BLOOD STAINED PIECE OF PAPER HE LOOKS LIKE A WERE PITBULL.

DAVE

Right let the quiz begin question 1, who you looking at?

DAVID

Is that a question?

JEMIMA

Must be just write something down.

DAVE

Question 2, you looking at nothing? You calling me nothing?

JEMIMA

I think you should write no, I'm a little scared.

DAVID

Don't be sweet heart, this is just post modern.

JEMIMA

Like Shooting Stars.

DAVID

And Big Dave the C**t is a tatooed George Dawes.

DAVE

Do you know what you're going home you shit stain?

DAVID

Ooh I know this one, a taxi?

JEMIMA

No silly, it's an ambulance.

SCENE2

DAVE AND JEMIMA ARE BANDAGED UP IN CASUALTY.

DAVID

You always were better at quizes Lambchop.

JEMIMA

It's because I read Heat.

A little gem , very funny. 1 point "want to Cambridge"?

Thanks will edit!

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