British Comedy Guide

Bed and Breakfast

This is something I came up with when thinking of a sketch for the competition this week!
Didn't use it so putting it in for critique.

EXT. A LARGE GROUP OF WHITE SKINHEADS KNOCK ON THE DOOR OF A B&B. A BLACK MAN ANSWERS THE DOOR.

BLACK MAN
Can I help you

SKINHEAD
Yeah, we have a group booking here for the weekend?

BLACK MAN
Oh yes come in, (HANDS OVER KEYS) here are your keys. Make yourself at home

SCREEN GOES DARK THEN CUTS TO MAN BEHIND RECEPTION DESK LOOKING SHOCKED

SKINHEAD
V.O.
Can we have some more bedding please?

CAMERA CUTS TO THE LARGE GROUP OF MEN NOW ALL DRESSED AS THE KU KLUX KLAN

Was this one to risque or did we just not like it!

Not so much risque as abit obvious and it doesn't really develop the idea.

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