First two Trans Shorts in the can.

Hi All,

Fresh from running the Trans Comedy Award with the BBC Writers room

https://www.comedy.co.uk/forums/thread/26189/

I thought that as I had excluded myself from entering the competition for obvious reasons I decided to write some scripts and film them myself with the help of some trans friends. Here are our first two. Hope you like them.

http://youtu.be/bs8m40n13l8 http://youtu.be/OFxxwJV_zHY

Claire x

Those are both really excellent, economic got a punchline good stuff

Quote: sootyj @ July 10 2013, 4:32 PM BST

Those are both really excellent, economic got a punchline good stuff

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Thanks for your kind remarks

Claire

Excellent! Especially the second one.

I prefer the first, they're both good but there's something quite classy about starting with the punchline and bringing it back at the end

Both quite sweet, although I was disappointed that such a dated stereotype was still being perpetuated. I'm taking about the builder, of course.

Quote: Nogget @ July 10 2013, 6:17 PM BST

I was disappointed that such a dated stereotype was still being perpetuated.

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Sadly the sketch is based on a true story that happened to me. Not so much a sterotype as just an example of what still happens to people.

Thankyou that you found them sweet

Claire

Liked them both. Very polished with top quality editing.

playfull

Brevity's the soul of wit, and you've proved it. Excellent, Claire!