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Started a new comedy series on YouTube, check it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yRmSDYpnceQ

Give me feedback.

Don't be so rude or you will get Jack shit.

I thought Jack Shit was banned?

I watched it. But I don't think you're allowed to give Critique in Showcase.
It needs to be in Critique.

Thats up to a mod. If you ask Aaron nicely he may help.

I put it in Showcase as it seems to be a finished piece of work rather than a script or something in progress.

I viewed that one, Jacob. You seem not to have a scrap of discernible comedy talent and your loose and aimlessly filmed comedy video has no direction, no obvious comedy at all, and your sense of humour is crude, immature, puerile, very weak and your taste, poor; your comedy judgment, dire. If this one is a mark of your best quality, you'd be better off giving up now, honestly. Hope the feedback's useful. Cheers.

That's not the Showcase way Kipper & you know it!

Do I? The chap asked for feedback so I obliged. Never given it before here so I thought I'd make the effort for once. Have I boo booed?

Ah rule 4 section c.
Sorry my mistake, as you were.

Sorry Jacob - can't give you feedback on your item. Followed the link but could not find your 'comedy series'- just got some dull interview with a chav?

playfull

I laughed when Paul threw a bottle at Bradley and told him to "f**k off"

I could picture that as a whole new BBC 3 series.

Quote: Alfred J Kipper @ July 4 2013, 11:48 PM BST

The chap asked for feedback

Strictly speaking, he demanded it. My feedback would be, don't use the imperative case if you want people to say nice things about your video.

Quote: jacob Voce @ July 4 2013, 5:20 PM BST

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yRmSDYpnceQ

Give me feedback.

Always look both ways when you cross the road, up AND down.

Spotted a joke from The Naked Gun but with you replaced midget with Tom Cruise. Boo! Lacking in originality.

Could have had the muggers mug the camera man instead of ignoring him.

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