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MAN SITS STARING INTO A MIRROR, HE BEGINS TO READ FROM A LONG LIST

MAN:'Things I need to stop doing now I've turned thirty' -

HE READIES HIMSELF, TAKING A DEEP DETERMINED BREATH

Number 1: talking to myself in the mirror (screws up the list angrily)
Who wrote this shit? (peers closely into the mirror) was it you?

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Tidy and quaint and very visual.

Works for me Shandy.

I don't think it's that strong as a standalone gag. As part of a longer piece, I think it would slot in nicely, like a sitcom scene.

Quote: Ben @ June 29 2013, 10:54 AM BST

As part of a longer piece, I think it would slot in nicely, like a sitcom scene.

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That's what I had in mind when I thought of it, sort of the grain of a character if I ever do come up with a sitcom.

Cheers guys.

It's definitely funny
But I agree it's not quite stand alone

really liked this one

i think it could stand on its own as a sketch - maybe as filler in between two longer sketches - could imagine it in an episode of 'Big Train'

often it is the short and sweet ones that make me laugh the most