The Bus - Ont The Bus 1

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Can anyone give me feedback please?

Bumping threads is technically against the rules, Steve, so I'd avoid doing that where possible. If people haven't commented on a sketch, then that usually says it all. Move on to another.

Ok, noted

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I thought this one was a lot better! Well done Could you add a new character in there? I like to see the next part of this.