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The Bus - Graffiti
Nice and simple but needs a stronger end maybe?
I find "Cock and Balls" funnier than "Big Massive Cock" unless you throw throbbing into the mix that is?
Maybe he could go into a detailed comparison of the aerodynamic pros and cons between Cock and Balls verses Space Rocket.
Drag factor from the balls etc
THINKER
"Now if it was a shaved bag? Well...?
WOMAN (grabbing her child)
Come along dear, we're walking"
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The haters last line - which is essentially the punchline here -is far too wordy and long. You need to make it snappier by condensing it. Saying that, it doesn't really finish the sketch. A hater at the bus stop is a good idea for a regular character, but I don't think you've nailed it yet.
Thanks. The idea is that the hater is a regular character. See other post and I have many more ideas. Will take this on board though 
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