Sketch Comedy!

I love to write comedy in general. I was wondering what you guys think about it. Let me know:

http://www.youtube.com/user/OurNameHereProd

Thanks so much!

Well first of all if you want feedback post one message in the Critique forum.
I think you'll find one of the mods wil do that for you.

Secondly well made, nicely acted and very economic style. That's all good you have a joke to tell and you don't let a bunch of inteference get in the way.

Performances may be a little too underplayed I mean your characters are literally just joke conduits.

And I think the jokes are just a little too simplistic. Albeit the spelling bee has a weird charm I'm quite sold on. It certainly made me smile.

Quote: sootyj @ May 29 2013, 8:17 AM BST

Well first of all if you want feedback post one message in the Critique forum.
I think you'll find one of the mods wil do that for you.

Secondly well made, nicely acted and very economic style. That's all good you have a joke to tell and you don't let a bunch of inteference get in the way.

Performances may be a little too underplayed I mean your characters are literally just joke conduits.

And I think the jokes are just a little too simplistic. Albeit the spelling bee has a weird charm I'm quite sold on. It certainly made me smile.

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Does that chat up line ever work?

You know the answer to that doncha

Nope?!

But I'm scarpering off this thread quick sharp before the Mod Squad arrive and haul my ass down town for being all off topicy

Toodles!

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