Jealous Boyfriend sketch

Hi all,

Have a look at our jealous boyfriend sketch -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8iHG09Qruko

Thanks!

It's seriously lacking the funnies, no where near enough jokes.

The one about makeup is great, it's also too long and it's kind of an old joke.
(much better done in True Romance).

I think if it was maybe half the length and had more jokes it would work.

somebody should really move this to Showcase.

It's critique they're asking for feedback.